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Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph? Th…

  • Question 8c of 10 - Choppy Writing

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  • Question Type: Multiple Choice
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  • Question: Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph? The tornado was huge. It left a path of destruction five miles wide. No one was injured. The damage was extensive.
  • Answers:
  1. The tornado was huge and left a path of destruction five miles wide. It did not injure anyone, but the damage was extensive.
  2. The huge tornado left a path of destruction five miles wide. While it injured no one, it caused extensive damage.
  3. While the huge tornado did not injure anyone, it left a path of destruction five miles wide and caused extensive damage.
  4. None of the above

The correct answer is: While the huge tornado did not injure anyone, it left a path of destruction five miles wide and caused extensive damage.

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