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Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph? La…

  • Question 9b of 10 - Choppy Writing

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  • Question Type: Multiple Choice
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  • Question: Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph? Laura had had enough of Nelly's arrogance and bragging. She pushed Nelly into the creek. She knew the creek was filled with leeches.
  • Answers:
  1. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogant bragging, so she pushed Nelly into the creek, even though she knew it was full of leeches.
  2. Laura pushed Nelly into the leech-filled creek. This action was because Laura was sick of Nelly's bragging.
  3. Although Laura knew the creek was full of leeches, she pushed Nelly in anyway. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogance and bragging.
  4. None of the above

The correct answer is: Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogant bragging, so she pushed Nelly into the creek, even though she knew it was full of leeches.

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