- Circle or highlight all adverbs. Take them out. …
- Look for a single word or short phrase followed by a comma. …
- Delete helping verbs. …
- Delete to be verbs. …
- Turn some nouns into verbs: “I concluded” is better than “I came to the conclusion.”
What do I do if my college essay is too long?
- – Don't clear your throat. …
- – Use contractions. …
- – Select more descriptive words. …
- – Add hyphens occasionally. …
- – Don't repeat yourself over and over (and over). …
- – Eliminate Excessive Examples.
Can you abbreviate in college essays?
Abbreviations are not at all acceptable in formal
writing such as a college essay. Also, slang needs to be avoided. Use common language that people of all ages will understand. Remember your audience; you're writing for your professor, not your friends.
What should you not say in a college essay?
- Never rehash your academic and extracurricular accomplishments.
- Never write about a “topic”
- Never start with a preamble.
- Never end with a “happily ever after” conclusion.
- Never pontificate.
- Never retreat into your thoughts.
- Never hold back.
- Never give TMI.
What words should I not use in my college essay?
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“Thing,” “stuff,” “good,” “bad
,” “big“ The problem with these words is colloquiality and vagueness, inappropriate for academic language. It's okay to use them in everyday talk; but when in essays, they sound too elementary and make admission officers think of your poor vocabulary.
Do colleges actually read essays?
Usually one to two admissions officers read an essay.
Some colleges do not look at essays
. Some colleges will choose only to look at your GPA, Course Rigor and SAT/ACT scores. If you GPA and Test Scores are high enough, they may not feel that and essay is necessary.
What are the best college essay topics?
- Prompt #1: Share your story.
- Prompt #2: Learning from obstacles.
- Prompt #3: Challenging a belief.
- Prompt #4: Solving a problem.
- Prompt #5: Personal growth.
- Prompt #6: What captivates you?
- Prompt #7: Topic of your choice.
- Describe a person you admire.
Can you use you in college essays?
As we said, feel free to use “I” or “we” in your college essays. This is your story, so tell it. But it would be very rare for you to have a reason to address the admissions officer directly, unless you are somehow writing a note to a specific person.
What should you not do in an essay?
- Writing a Synopsis, Not An Analytical Essay. …
- Not Having a Strong Thesis Statement. …
- Using Too Many Quotes in An Essay. …
- Plagiarism. …
- Making Grammar, Spelling and Pronoun Mistakes. …
- Not Having a Good Bibliography. …
- Using Resources That Aren't Credible. …
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What should never occur in an essay?
Don't try to ‘wow' the reader with grandiose statements or pithy quotes that broadly relate to your topic. The trouble with such trite openings is that they do not focus your reader.
Rhetorical questions
are also a bad choice for a first sentence. You are writing an essay, not a blog entry.
What can I say instead of in conclusion?
- altogether,
- briefly,
- categorically,
- chiefly,
- finally,
- largely,
- lastly,
- mostly,
Do colleges know if you lie?
Colleges know how to spot inconsistencies in your application. They notice
when things you say don't match with what your teachers
or counselors say in the letters of recommendation. And colleges won't hesitate to call your counselor to verify information that doesn't seem right. They don't do it to catch you in a lie.
Does a bad college essay matter?
The bad news? No matter how gorgeous your prose is,
you can't get into college based on the strength of your essay alone
. “No-one ever gets into college because you write a great essay,” Heaton says. “You can not get in because you write a really bad one.”
How much weight do essays matter for college?
While
there's no specific weighting of essays in the college admissions process
, you can understand their role if you think of the application and the essay as two distinct parts of the evaluation, serving different roles. The application is where an admissions officer decides if you are qualified for admission.
What are good topics for an essay?
| 1 The production and sale of cigarettes should be made illegal. | 2 Participating in team sports helps to develop good character. | 3 Americans should have more holidays and longer vacations. | 4 Dieting makes people fat. | 5 College students should have complete freedom to choose their own courses. |
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